Mountain Top
Standing here on top of the mountain
Ready for, but afraid of what is to come
Cold and fierce is the wind for some
Yet some how peaceful, serene and plain
Looking for cues to guide me all the same
One board is all that is needed to and from
In one swift movement my song in sung
My thoughts are lost inside my brain
Swift and sleek down the mountain side
Fill with excitement deep inside
Are there many gazing at me
At times it feels like I’m in outer space
So high up face to face with a tree
I’m here again in this amazing place
I really like this one. I love snowboarding myself (which is what I'm guessing it is about).
ReplyDeleteI'm in love with the line, "so high up face to face with a tree"! I've never experienced that. I like the thought of a tree having a face. It seems as if the two are equals! On a form note, the sestet doesn't match any of the available rhyme schemes: c d c d c d
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It makes me think of the time I hiked to Jerry Johnson Hotsprings, but in winter time. I love that you did it about snow boarding. Nice work!
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